Team Paper Review Report Examples

Brian

Strengths
The overwork is organized well.
Brian has used recent references.
Weakness
The ideas are too general in that there is no evidence of a similar solution or suggestions having worked elsewhere.
Why
For any business work to gain believability, there is a need to have empirical evidence such as an example of a different studio(s) and how it improved due to the suggestions.
There is some lapse in the organization of the work. For example, the running head after the second page and the title ought to be in all caps. There are repetitions of some sections. Under the generic strategy, there is a detailed discussion of the differentiation strategy. Then after that, there is the adoption of differentiation strategy on its own. Expand on the application of the ideas discussed.
Why
Poultry organized work may make the ideas presented confusing. The work loses its validity.

Tonya

Strengths
Explicit arguments with comparisons, e.g. comparing Apple and Samsung

Has used the most recent resources

Weakness
The grammar is very poor; one may not understand some sections. For example,”.. its innovative roots and raise the raise the bar” or “regardless of the their ability to keep costs down.”
Why

Good grammar is crucial since it helps the reader to understand the concepts.

Unreferenced work e.g. “from their competitors ().” It is evident that Tonya borrowed some work with the intention of referencing but failed.
Why
All ideas borrowed from an external book need for proper in citations. Failure to do so amounts to plagiarism.

Kimberly

Strengths

Excellent organizations and consistency

Has used a variety of sources
Weakness

Too much-borrowed work.

Why

It is advisable for one to paraphrase the work other than just quoting large paragraphs.

There are some points without references.
Why
It is good for all work borrowed to have a clear reference to avoid plagiarism.