Good Essay On Beach Trip With Family

Beach Trip With Family

Pleasant description
On a lovely summer weekend when sun was playing hide and seek with the clouds, and the temperature was low I accompanied with my mother and my small brother to the beach, the aroma of the sand and roaring of the waves triggered my excitement. I carried our stuff and found a nice place, where I placed the mat for mother and used our umbrella shade to get some cover if needed. There were peaceful trade winds that blew offshore; thus, keeping the waters serene and buzzing our ears. I applied sunscreen on my body and in the meantime my brother started to build a sand castle. He called for help but I took my surfing board and hurriedly jumped into the water and started surfing over the waves. Though I was alone but I was enjoying this peaceful and calm feeling, the water splashing from my surfboard making a shower on my back persuading me to dive in. I was joining my mother and brother in short intervals, and helping them in their sand castle. At last I dived into the water and swam like never before, I tried different styles even I floated on the waves; it was amazing and a memorable experience as I watched the seagulls and aquatic birds flying, making unique and attractive patterns on the sky. It was not just these things; there were plenty of other things that I enjoyed. We tasted different drinks and cocktails while sunbathing to refresh our taste buds and met new people. While on the beach, we enjoyed different servings including grilled cheese and stuffed steamed fish. It was a memorable and fun packed trip with my family, and we enjoyed the tropical paradise without any restrictions.

Unpleasant description

Despite the fact that the beach was lovely and clean, it was overcrowded, may be because of the two reasons that it was a weekend and secondly the weather was perfect for a family picnic. This made the place little untidy and congested, kids were adding more to this by throwing garbage and disrupting the hygienic and healthy environment. The lack of restriction in the beach resulted in drinking; entertainment was so loud and awful. Due to this some people caught into a fight and exchange of words, bachelors were also a part of this crowded the place, many of them were enjoying but few were there to spoil the picnic of others through their cheap and immoral acts, and of course their favorite ogling. Some of the beach lovers reserved their place for beach football and volleyball, creating more difficulty for the people on the beach.

Rhetorical analysis

I decided to describe a beach trip with my family because I know there is a lot that I observed, and I am able to describe it in detail. My trip to the beach offered me the opportunity to observe several things, whether pleasant or unpleasant. While explaining the pleasant and unpleasant descriptions, I considered the concepts in the writer’s toolbox so as to make a description of the beach. Since it was my first time on this beach, I ensured that I observed everything considering what I liked and what I disliked. The trip to the beach with my family was a great experience; however, there were some things that I did not like. In the pleasant description, I used words such as peaceful trade winds that blew offshore to indicate how peaceful the environment was and a nice place to stay. In the unpleasant description, I used words and made statements such as overcrowded, disrupting the hygienic environment and immoral acts that helps to portray the unpleasant environment. In both descriptions, I considered using different words and tones in order to distinguish the two descriptions in the same place and time. I tried to present the whole scene that I experienced at the beach and used those vocabulary which best fits for the situation, and I have described the necessary things, those which I believe should be included. I discussed nature, the birds, their pattern and every inspiring masterpiece of nature. Manipulation of word choices is essential when demonstrating the positive and negative aspects of anything, and I believe that I have chosen the words appropriately. I tried to use excellent and proper sentence structures in order to provide a better and clear description to ensure understanding of the beach and persuade the reader to visit that beach at least for once in his lifetime.

Reflection

After completing this assignment I realized that how difficult is for an author to write a story and attract the readers, it is very difficult to plot each and everything properly and to describe it to its best. It is not easy to write even a single page, it takes a thorough understanding, brainstorming and pondering of the topic. A well-organized piece of writing is the one where readers develop interest in the writing on their own. I have made efficient use of my limited skills and knowledge in ensuring a detailed description of this place. Before beginning I thought it would be difficult but later I realized that once you start writing thins get easier and it is much easy to describe a place that I am familiar with than an imaginary one. I have also learned that it is possible to write about one place offering two different perspectives, and how to handle and describe them using suitable words. When describing the two descriptions, I manipulated words so that to describe the beach in two different ways. In order to describe one place in two different ways, it requires excellent planning and proper integration of the writer’s toolbox that acts as a guide. As a writer, it is essential to integrate different human senses so as to indulge the reader. I also experienced that we neglect many things in our life regarding them as unimportant and useless, but a writer’s mind is totally different. A writer grasps the hidden things resting in a particular situation and makes it an interesting piece of writing for the reader. I believe presenting your real life experiences or imagination in the form of writing surely enhance your senses and your abilities, as a writer works and write on almost all the topics. I have read articles of same writers but on different topics with the same command, grip and knowledge of the subject. Moreover, this assignment motivated me to continue writing my personal experiences or imaginary thoughts and I believe it will surely help me later in life.